I believe that in previous post I mentioned a small irritation I have for poetry with rules, but poetry is poetry and I’m prepared to eat my words… I may take literal “poetic license” with the other four poems requested in the writing challenge though… This hakiu is inspired by a series of short stories written by a friend, and I (links below).. O.K here goes nothing…
The Waiting:
Dawn breaking, quickly, quietly.
Death sits in a far corner,
pondering, planning…
http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/challenge-haiku/
https://standinginthestorm.wordpress.com/2013/11/15/a-story-of-evil-wicked-witch/
http://beforeyoucall.wordpress.com/2013/11/21/proverbs-3130-decus-leporum-and-laudabile/
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Eerie!
Thank you, 😀
I hope death stays in that far corner a LONG time
haha, no doubt 🙂
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As creepy as Death sitting in a corner planning is, I really liked it 🙂
haha, thank you… it was fun to write
Apollo would be proud 😉
I’d hope so 😉
Such tense imagery this.
A very interesting read. 🙂
Well, thanks! I’m glad you thought so 😀
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